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For this assignment, I decided to do do an observations and inferences chart, a more clear cut SOAPSTone, and free-writing. The SOAPSTone will help me create a brief outline from which I can expand my ideas further in the form of an observations and inferences chart. The problem is that sometimes I may run out of ideas to place into the chart which is where the free-writing comes into play. By typing out all my ideas, I could pick and choose which ones fit the chart and add them. Free-writing is like brainstorming. All these activities help facilitate each other which is why I chose these methods.
Here is the link to the pre-writing activity:
https://docs.google.com/a/email.arizona.edu/document/d/1hGK1ammm8fp6lgb95cL-I1chx2tCdLsVoHKV03FlXYs/edit?usp=sharing
It may still need to undergo some revisions.
I commented on
Laura Shoemake's blog and
Gabi Dodson's blog.
I think all your prewriting activities are going to effectively help you start your paper! However, the observation/inference chart (I think), should include more than just elements of SOAPSTone, considering you already clearly stated those elements. I have a lot of observations in my chart that aren't SOAPSTone, but are just details I noticed about HONY that may be relevant while I'm writing.
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